The part about anti stereotypes is clear but try and add a few more key words to explain what I might be seeing in your vid. Is it performance is it narrative?
I think you're targeting audience is too low, I think your audience ages range from 12 -18, maybe even older if you're targeting it to tumblr kids. Good music choice, will work well with the narrative and performance video.
We think you should add more images of a specific location and how you will film the music video. We like the music choice for the genre and it will work well.
Is it possible to have bold neutral colours.
ReplyDeleteThe part about anti stereotypes is clear but try and add a few more key words to explain what I might be seeing in your vid. Is it performance is it narrative?
I think you're targeting audience is too low, I think your audience ages range from 12 -18, maybe even older if you're targeting it to tumblr kids.
ReplyDeleteGood music choice, will work well with the narrative and performance video.
We think you should add more images of a specific location and how you will film the music video.
ReplyDeleteWe like the music choice for the genre and it will work well.
Be more specific about what the storyline would be and also I agree with Sophie about the age range.
ReplyDeleteVery good that you pointed out the inspirations and also the colours you want to feature :)
the audience is quite narrow, if you said it was between a curtain age.
ReplyDeletethe music with the colors and go together well.